One more week and I can call this draft done. *phew*
I prefer revising/editing to getting a story on paper in the first place.
“I want to help you, but you’ve got to help yourself.”
I wanted to trust him. I did trust him, but not with this. Not with her. Not yet.
I was too used to hiding her in my heart to crack open the door wide enough for him to slip inside.
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* The “her” in question is the heroine’s daughter. 🙂
Jessica Subject says
Very intriguing! I want to know who the ‘her’ is.
All the best with getting the draft finished! 🙂
Angela Guillaume says
Lots of emotion! Thanks for sharing, Hailey x
Meg Maguire says
Love the emotion in this six!
Sarah Grimm says
Really want to know more about this. Who is the ‘her’ she is referring to?
Carrie Ann Ryan says
Oh, trust him! So emotional.
Krystal Wade says
But he wants to help! Let him in! 🙂 Great six.
Taryn Kincaid says
“hiding her in my heart” — awesome phrase!
Eleri Stone says
Love the ‘hiding her in my heart’ phrase too. Beautiful.
Sam Crescent says
I want to know more, 😀
Liz Crowe says
So much said in so few words. Well done!
Lex Valentine says
As usual, your six is so full of emotion! Great job!
Good girl, don’t trust him yet. Up the tension. 🙂 Great six!
A GREAT SIX, FULL OF EMOTION XX
Must have pressed the caps lock before i commented! LOL It looks really aggressive in block capitals! LOL Or like i shouted my comment at you! ROFL!! SEE YA!!! LOL
Emily Reese says
Interesting… I’m super curious.
Vivien Dean says
I’m a little confused about who’s referring to who, but still intriguing. Thanks for sharing!
Dee Carney says
Melissa MacKinnon says
Very vivid imagery. great six!
Gem Sivad says
I really like the way you describe her reserve. She trusts him but…somethings are buried deep in the heart.
Wow… those are some strong dependency issues… very interesting 😉
Alexia Reed says
Very meaningful 6 lines. 🙂
E. Jamie says
J.A. Beard says
A lot of strong emotion and character insight here. I like it.