I’m slowly making progress in post NaNo revisions. I have around 30K cleaned up–so about half the book. Not too shabby. 😉
I reached behind my head, grabbed a mixture of shirt collar and skin, then dropped to one knee as I flipped the male over my shoulder. Dishes rattled in the cabinet and footsteps thundered from all directions as more onlookers rushed to the scene.
After I stood, leaving my challenger to moan and curl on the floor, the others scattered with scrunched expressions as if they were leaves blown by a foul wind.
Harper shook his head and covered his mouth with his hand.
“He started it,” I said.
“I’m sure he did.”
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Jessica Subject says
Good job on revisions! I'm curious to know what happened before this excerpt. She sounds tough and I like that.
Lisa Fox says
What a fun excerpt! Good luck with the revisions!
Graylin Fox says
Yes! I love kick ass women!
Pippa Jay says
I bet he did deserve it too!
Rebecca Royce says
Really makes me want to read it!
nice. Good job on revisions.
Eleri Stone says
Awesome. I can't believe you're halfway through revisions on your NaNo book!! I haven't looked at mine since 11/30. You rock.
Sandi Sookoo says
I love a strong heroine 🙂
Christa Paige says
Oh a heroine who can play with the boys and still take names- awesome.
Taryn Kincaid says
"Leaves blown by foul wind" = great image!
Dee Carney says
Kick some ass! Yeah! LOL
Marsha A. Moore says
Really strong heroine. She stands on her own, but must have a big weakness. Wonder what it is?
Joleene Naylor says
Loved this! Very well written!!
Eve Cassidy says
"He started it." Great line!