I’m doing the revision thing over the next couple of weeks, trying to get ready for submission in April(ish).
My shares will be from that wip. 🙂
A metallic screech sliced open my ears as the diner trembled. “What the hell was that?”
“Madelyn,” a masculine voice, raw with pain, roared down the short hall.
“Oh, God.” Maddie’s eyes rounded at whatever she saw. The plates she held wobbled, sliding down her arm to shatter as they hit the floor.
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Hailey writes about questionable applications of otherwise perfectly good magic, the transformative power of love, the family you choose for yourself, and blowing stuff up. Not necessarily all at once. That could get messy.
Graylin Fox says
Sounds like trouble, I love it.
Stacey Kennedy says
Uh oh…will she run????
Ella Drake says
Hurry with those revisions! 🙂
Rebecca Royce says
Great writing. I want this book right now.
Gem Sivad says
I like his roar already. 🙂 Must have more.
gem
Heather Thurmeier says
Good luck with your revisions and submission! *Every time I come to your site, I get distracted by your header. Damn he's hot!
Vivien Jackson says
A metallic screech sliced open my ears .. Love the violent metaphor!
Jessica says
Uh oh, that sounds bad.
Great six.
Cindy says
Hailey you're killing me!! What a teaser and such a long wait for the release!
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Laura Kaye says
Really vivid. Great showing!
Trish McCallant says
Okay, i want to see how is roaring "“Madelyn,”
Need more from this point next week, please!
Taryn Kincaid says
I'm with Gem. Anticipating Roarer Boy!
Way to go!
Chrystalla says
Oh no, I wonder what happened! Good job!
Lisa Fox says
Trouble is obviously on the way!
Sarah Grimm says
Oooh, I like this!
Eleri Stone says
Love the last line especially. Great description.
Sandi Sookoo says
Nicely drawn scene!
Paranormal Opinion says
I definitely want to know what happens next!
Christa Paige says
Yes! I'm totally hooked. Want to know what is happening, and what will occur next!
Dee Carney says
Well?! What was it?!
Casi says
What'd she see? What'd she see?
Jessica Subject says
Love your six! Can't wait to read more.
Marie Dees says
Love the action and the setting. A diner! Perfect.
JoAnne Kenrick says
fantastic showing…omg I loved it! Good luck meeting your April deadline xx Hope you make it!
Pippa Jay says
Well I'd run! That opening line set my teeth on edge right from the start.
Joder says
Uh oh, trouble just walked in….
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kerrianne says
This sounds very interesting!
Lauri J Owen says
And now I want to know what she saw! Great six!
Cathy M says
Great six, good luck with your submission, Hailey.
Layna Pimentel says
Oh come on! Don't leave us hanging!! 😉
Great post.
Cate Masters says
Great teaser! Would love to read more.
Arlene Webb says
Wow. Very powerful, the show of the plates falling is excellent
dianne hartsock says
Sounds really painful and scary. Think I'd run!
Lex Valentine says
Who is he? What is he?
Laurel Kriegler says
Run. Definitely!
Emily Cale says
Oh no! What made her drop the plates?
Seleste deLaney says
Very intriguing six. I want to know more!
Katherine Tomlinson says
You had me at the rumble.
jayel kaye says
Wow. What tension!
Darcy Drake says
Sounds like trouble, but maybe the good kind… After she's done cleaning up any broken diner plates.
Devin Harnois says
I like this. I like it A LOT. I want to know what happens next!
Eve Cassidy says
Very nice six! Good luck on the revisions.
Angela S Stone says
Oooo sounds like trouble has just arrived! Love it!
xx
Angela
Lynne Murray says
Suspenseful six!
Beth C. says
One heck of a teaser. Can't wait to learn more.
Lucy Felthouse says
Wow, that's a teaser and a half! 🙂
Joleene Naylor says
"raw with pain" – excellent!