Admit it, you thought I was going to blog about Jim Butcher again, didn’t you? Although I am tempted…nah. I have progress to share. I finished my revisions on Wicked Kin two days ago. It’s been sent out to a few brave souls who will read it over and mark up any suggested changes, dropped words, etc.
Wicked was a little over 60,000 words when I submitted it the first time. It’s now 70,348. I think I scrapped 5,000 entirely. Then rewrote about 90% of the book. The first two of Nathaniel’s povs were the only material I kept and even those were tweaked.
After Wicked is contracted (yes, I am employing the power of positive thinking) and before it is released, I’ll share the thousand words or so that inspired me to write a novel about Nathaniel. I have loved him from word one. His world, his voice, everything about him is magical to me. I hope that I’m able to share him with you all someday soon.
So while I can’t say I enjoy revisions, they do strengthen a book. Further edits tighten it up and give it a nice shine that makes me all tingly inside. I mean, after months of plotting *shudders*, writing, revising, tweaking, deleting, you want the best for your book. Yes, that means sending it out into the world and having it return a little worse for wear and sporting those lovely red lines and comment bubbles. Although, I have to admit I do get a sick thrill editing them.
Sometimes your critique partners or betas can suggest changes that take you by surprise. Such a simple thing as a change in word choice can make such a powerful difference.
God willing, I will have my crits returned and edits applied in time to resubmit Wicked around the first of November. I’ll have my fingers crossed that the massive changes I made will make my editor happy. She had one request for my revisions, and I did that. The rest…well, it will be a surprise. Hopefully, the good kind.
Hailey writes about questionable applications of otherwise perfectly good magic, the transformative power of love, the family you choose for yourself, and blowing stuff up. Not necessarily all at once. That could get messy.


